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Stickman • Exibir tópico - Um novo ponto de vista

Um novo ponto de vista

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Re: Um novo ponto de vista

Mensagempor NinSalamance » Sex Fev 14, 2014 1:41 pm

OLOCO, O EABR0 PAROU O BAN NA MÃO!!! Bem... Se bem que ele é admin, enquanto o Lelo é um simples moderador...
Fora alguns erros de ortografia e concordância que eu achei ao longo to texto, esse capítulo ficou até bom. Sempre que a porrada começa a comer as coisas ficam mais interessantes, não acha, meu amigo?!

Vi que você fez algumas alterações nos parágrafos das PEDRAS, e isso melhorou muito o fluir do texto. O Ideal é que a palavra não volte a se repetir no mesmo parágrafo, a menos que seja inevitável. Para isso a gente usa sinônimos, que no caso poderiam ser "rochas", "fragmentos", "entulho"...
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Re: Um novo ponto de vista

Mensagempor EABR0 » Qua Fev 19, 2014 9:22 am

SOU ADMIN NESSA PORRA MAS É CLARO QUE SOU IRMÃO DO NIN, É OBVIO!
Li tudo, fanart 46% pronta, to gostando muito da historia, quero ver mais!
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Re: Um novo ponto de vista

Mensagempor BODE_LOKO » Qua Fev 19, 2014 12:14 pm

Bom, com essa já são 6 histórias da Stickman que tem peso que salvei em word ( tbm salvei todas as historias do skype euhueheueuhhee). Se tiver qualquer problema com o site, é só me pedir!

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Now it's on topic:

Caraca velho, que batalha loca do carai mano! Pena que o capitulo parou no meio dela mas fodassi! Vou esperar o próximo!

Fiquei meio perdido com a leituro no ultimo paragrafo... mas blz toh curtindo!
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